SNOW WHITE QUEEN
Snow White Snow White
I shouldn't have hurt you right
I felt so bad and became tight
She said its ok but I was too uptight
I was innocent & she knows it alright
I also apologized for friday night
I shouldn't have hurt you right
I felt so bad and became tight
She said its ok but I was too uptight
I was innocent & she knows it alright
I also apologized for friday night
I gave her a candy to prove myself right
I promised I would never hurt my
Beloved SNOWWHITE
Awesome:)Keep it up:)
ReplyDeletegood rhyming word u got there.... sounds good when compared to others poems of urs...
ReplyDeleteI think u need good inspiration... like the time when u wrote this... u know wat i mean... no hard feelings :P :D
@Venk: Yes, indeed maga. once i got my inspiration the words just poured out .. very happy with the outcome :)
ReplyDelete@Padam : Hey, thank u :) .. I'll keep u posted bro :)
ReplyDeletewhat i wonder is what made your write.
ReplyDeletei would understand if thats alright.
when i ask you, dont say yeah right.
for all you know things might go right :)
@GK: magne, its quite obvious maga. i cant say it :P lol
ReplyDeleteI still wish that you say it in brief.
ReplyDeleteFor there might be a lot of misbelief.
looks like you have written this poem in grief.
and would like to give you a big relief.
@Kama: thanks .. but umm no thanks :P
ReplyDeletei certainly wrote it in grief
there aint no misbelief
for all i can say is she is in relief
I am in disbelief.
ReplyDeleteHaha .. beda maga ! hey BS check out my new one, The Divine Guardian :)
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